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Friday, November 18, 2011

Turkey’s Last Plea. An essay. 
Today, we outlined and completed and had stamped a rough draft of an essay written to save the life of a turkey.
Make sure you have a great intro paragraph with a thesis -- what you are trying to say for the whole essay. Work on conclusion. 
Make the reader want to respond the way you want them to. Give them a memory or an action. 

 RD due EOP today.  

HW: Tues FD Turkey essay
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Sebastopol, CA
After many years as a newspaper reporter and writer, a job that I was lucky enough to love, I got my English teaching credential, hoping to pass on to kids how to find their unique voice and clearly communicate what they think and feel. Public school educated in Philadelphia, college in New York City (Barnard College), transferred to and graduated from UC Berkeley in English and received a master's degree in journalism from Columbia University. Yay, my son, my student in 8th grade, is now a Cal alumni, too, a 2017 graduate with a degree in computer science, now working at Google (You Tube) as a product manager. William Faulkner is one of my favorite writers, as well as Anne Lamott, Langston Hughes and many of the nighttime, satirical comedy shows. On my top bookshelf sit Nobel Prize winning writers Toni Morrison and Orhan Pamuk, along with friends who have won Pulitzer Prizes in journalism, who started writing in junior high or in writing groups in Sonoma County. Go public education in California!

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